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November 17, 2010

Last Pulse

I

Do

Not

Know

Quite

Exactly

Realize

Written

Words

Here

Are

Me

I

Do

Not

Know

Which

Events

Finally

Conclude

Culminate

Eventually

*

11 comments:

  1. None of us knows the real conclusion. Not sure I get your poem consciously, but I think it's imprinting something in my psyche. I like it.

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  2. you know some times i wonder about myself...hope this is not your last...smiles.

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  3. Glad you liked it, Myrna!
    (I'm in your psyche now! Uh-oh!)

    I have no plans on going anywhere, Brian. This actually just popped into my head as an exercise in letter counting. (1 letter, 2letters, 3 letters, etc.) I wanted to see if I could make it semi-cohesive.

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  4. very well thought out ... nice job

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  5. You are so creative, Eric. I can never guess what your one shot will be. They are always remarkable.

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  6. the
    words
    they
    keep
    on
    passing
    through
    going
    around
    touch
    and
    sound
    when
    you're
    done
    they've
    just
    begun

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  7. I like the vertical EKG look you made. You are a thinking man, Eric.

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  8. Sometimes it is very challenging to write within some rules.

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  9. Don't look at me, I don't know either.

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  10. Eric I added you at Poets United. Tried Emailing you back but it got kicked back so I figure I'd tell you here in short blurb.

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