Glad you liked it, Myrna! (I'm in your psyche now! Uh-oh!)
I have no plans on going anywhere, Brian. This actually just popped into my head as an exercise in letter counting. (1 letter, 2letters, 3 letters, etc.) I wanted to see if I could make it semi-cohesive.
None of us knows the real conclusion. Not sure I get your poem consciously, but I think it's imprinting something in my psyche. I like it.
ReplyDeleteyou know some times i wonder about myself...hope this is not your last...smiles.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it, Myrna!
ReplyDelete(I'm in your psyche now! Uh-oh!)
I have no plans on going anywhere, Brian. This actually just popped into my head as an exercise in letter counting. (1 letter, 2letters, 3 letters, etc.) I wanted to see if I could make it semi-cohesive.
very well thought out ... nice job
ReplyDeleteYou are so creative, Eric. I can never guess what your one shot will be. They are always remarkable.
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I like the vertical EKG look you made. You are a thinking man, Eric.
ReplyDeleteInteresting hmm..
ReplyDeleteSometimes it is very challenging to write within some rules.
ReplyDeleteDon't look at me, I don't know either.
ReplyDeleteEric I added you at Poets United. Tried Emailing you back but it got kicked back so I figure I'd tell you here in short blurb.
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