... seeing things a bit differently.
None of us knows the real conclusion. Not sure I get your poem consciously, but I think it's imprinting something in my psyche. I like it.
you know some times i wonder about myself...hope this is not your last...smiles.
Glad you liked it, Myrna!(I'm in your psyche now! Uh-oh!)I have no plans on going anywhere, Brian. This actually just popped into my head as an exercise in letter counting. (1 letter, 2letters, 3 letters, etc.) I wanted to see if I could make it semi-cohesive.
very well thought out ... nice job
You are so creative, Eric. I can never guess what your one shot will be. They are always remarkable.
thewordstheykeep on passingthroughgoingaroundtouchandsound whenyou'redonethey've justbegun
I like the vertical EKG look you made. You are a thinking man, Eric.
Sometimes it is very challenging to write within some rules.
Don't look at me, I don't know either.
Eric I added you at Poets United. Tried Emailing you back but it got kicked back so I figure I'd tell you here in short blurb.
You may put in your 2¢ worth, but I'll only pay you a penny for your thoughts.