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September 16, 2010

I’d Like To

I’d like to meet you

I’d like to greet you

I’d like to treat you

I’d like to sweet you

I’d like to replete you

I’d like to entreat you

I’d like to steam-heat you

I’d like to backseat you

I’d like to eat you

I’d like to bed sheet you

I’d like to repeat you

I’d like to complete you

I’d like to deplete you

I’d like to retreat you

I’d like to unseat you

I’d like to cheat you

I’d like to mistreat you

I’d like to beat you

I’d like to defeat you

I’d like to concrete you

I’d like to delete you

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4 comments:

  1. Whoa...what a time capsule of a relationship from beginning to end.

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  2. :)
    Hey youuu good this is!

    Now for that 'knew' instead of 'know', thanks for pointing it out.... I know about language, and that should be a first or a second conditional...not both mixed but,, I like it that way, #1 beacuse it's poetry and we are supossed to be able to 'break' some rules as far as we are understood,especially if that helps rhyme and #2 there is not a possibility that I know where he is now...

    ;)
    Dulce

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  3. This was very very clever, Eric. Oh, how sad when relationships go from promising to hell...

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  4. (giggling but not wanting to)...great flow in this one. "I'd like to backseat you" LOL - that's great! I had to read it again out loud to my husband and now I am cracking up!

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