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June 4, 2010

Seaside Vision (55)

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I saw her up on a sunlit veranda, her long hair swaying in the ocean breeze.

I froze, enraptured by her beauty.

She smiled down and a warm rush washed over me.

I called out, but she stepped inside.

I called again.

Suddenly a large, angry man appeared, scowling down at me.

I ran away.


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11 comments:

  1. lol. hope you can run faster than he does...lol. nice 55...

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  2. Thanks. I've already got my next 55 drafted. I'll just tweak it a little until next Friday rolls around.

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  3. Gotta be careful who you ogle!!
    Excellent 55 Eric.
    Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  4. I will indeed have a kick-ass weekend, G-man, and you do the same!

    (Providing Michigan weather lets us!)

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  5. You are a hoot. That was hilarious.

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  6. Aw, thanks! (I'm trying!)

    Next week's won't be a funny one.

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  7. I very smart move on your part. It is best to live another day.

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  8. LOL. The good ones are always taken.

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  9. First 55 of the day that actually made me laugh. Great visual as you ran for the border. Thanks for stopping in to read my 55.

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  10. Yeah, I've had days like that...

    Thanks for visiting mine!

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