... seeing things a bit differently.
Great title! Love the literal and figurative way the poem's form descends as well as the narrative. I especially like how you centered the text. Given it's evening right now, I just experienced what you written. A wonderful poem, Eric.
Wonderful. I really enjoyed reading this.
Thank you both for the nice comments!
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