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April 1, 2011

Like Thunder (55)

She came like thunder
from on high
darkened storm clouds
rolling by

She came like thunder
looming low
advancing like a
soldier row

She came like thunder
an approaching storm
came to me
In goddess form

She came like thunder

17 comments:

  1. so she was loud eh...you said it much nicer...a bit risque eh? smiles.

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  2. can you please introduce me to her?
    thanks.

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  3. Noisy little thing, eh? I know the type.

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  4. I can hear the rumbles, Eric!

    I liked the rhythm of this very much.

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  5. And then we got her a new muffler and she's much quieter now. ;)

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  6. She boomed into your life then? ;)

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  7. I know the feeling! Bring on the gods and goddesses of thunder.

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  8. She certainly made an impression, I see.

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  9. I hear the claps of thunder,
    what an unstoppable force she is,
    your 55 is a true bliss...

    I am trying to please, enjoyed your 55,
    winsome writing..

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  10. Not sure of the reference but I think she eats lightening and claps thunder. Great 55

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  11. Ha! Reminds me of a dream I had about the storms rolling in over Kansas. Clouds were in the shape of gods and goddesses rolling across the sky in oak wine barrels. Seriously. I have the craziest dreams.

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  12. Clouds..? Rain..? hehe
    This was done very beautifully indeed! Who is she? ;)

    Hugs x

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  13. Maybe it's you, Olivia - I saw your comment on G-Man's 55 today! (LOL!)

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  14. That is good- rhythm and reminder about ladies
    on a tear- thanks!

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  15. I love thunder storms. Nice 55.

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  16. Bubba....
    Loved your Rumble Thunder 55!
    Could be a bit Double Entendre...
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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