UR
world-changing force
to be reckoned-with
UR
electro-static shock
that gets me every time
UR
patient obsession
waiting always, alert
UR
staccato heart-beat
staggered breathing
UR
fluid mixture
of color and sound
UR
ebb and flow
of tides within
UR
diamonds and dynamite
explosively brilliant
UR
twirling whirlwind
twisting perception
UR
dragon whip and
scorpion's sting
UR
truth hidden
behind cliché
that's what i'm talking about!
ReplyDeleteYou seem to have a limitless wellspring of inspiration and your POV is always so fresh!
ReplyDeletehot dude...you are diamonds and dynamite....great combo...and expresses much...
ReplyDeleteUR great at coming at things from a whole new direction, Eric.
ReplyDeleteThis was a terrific read!
ReplyDeleteLoved the flow, intensity of word choice and emotion.
UR great Eric, loved the antithesis here...
ReplyDeleteThis was wonderful, Eric! Dynamic and full voiced.
ReplyDeleteLady Nyo
Really cool my man. using UR is different.. nice lil twist to a great poem
ReplyDeleteCool short stanzas add a punchy quality. Nice One!
ReplyDeleteWow, I'm hiding behind cliche as I type. Very well penned
ReplyDeletePiss and Vinegar....:-)
ReplyDeletethis was explosively brilliant Sir!
ReplyDeleteVery cool write. Not sure if I'm in the ballpark, but it makes me think of physics flux and circuitry. Either way UR creative.
ReplyDeleteit's raining diamonds!
ReplyDeleteIf only :)
I know I am, but thanks for noticing ..lol. Great job as always, Eric!
ReplyDeleteUR on a roll with this...
ReplyDelete...rob kistner
Image & Verse
Great poem Eric, great imagery and very different.
ReplyDeleteAnita.
Give me the diamonds, u keep the dynamite!
ReplyDeleteNicely paired up words in this piece, Eric.
ReplyDeletePamela
Loved it! The dangerous wordplay. Manifique! spelled my way... hehe nice one!
ReplyDeleteUR a gem fashioned under intense pressure with an explosive quality I might add. Nice one shot.
ReplyDeleteUR
ReplyDeleteamazing talent
writing poems I adore!
Ahh... that multi-faceted thing called love... what a superb poem, Eric!
UR very talented, Eric.
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