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March 22, 2011

Diamonds and Dynamite

UR
world-changing force
to be reckoned-with

UR
electro-static shock
that gets me every time

UR
patient obsession
waiting always, alert

UR
staccato heart-beat
staggered breathing

UR
fluid mixture
of color and sound

UR
ebb and flow
of tides within

UR
diamonds and dynamite
explosively brilliant

UR
twirling whirlwind
twisting perception

UR
dragon whip and
scorpion's sting

UR
truth hidden
behind cliché

23 comments:

  1. that's what i'm talking about!

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  2. You seem to have a limitless wellspring of inspiration and your POV is always so fresh!

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  3. hot dude...you are diamonds and dynamite....great combo...and expresses much...

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  4. UR great at coming at things from a whole new direction, Eric.

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  5. This was a terrific read!
    Loved the flow, intensity of word choice and emotion.

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  6. UR great Eric, loved the antithesis here...

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  7. This was wonderful, Eric! Dynamic and full voiced.

    Lady Nyo

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  8. Really cool my man. using UR is different.. nice lil twist to a great poem

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  9. Cool short stanzas add a punchy quality. Nice One!

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  10. Wow, I'm hiding behind cliche as I type. Very well penned

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  11. this was explosively brilliant Sir!

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  12. Very cool write. Not sure if I'm in the ballpark, but it makes me think of physics flux and circuitry. Either way UR creative.

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  13. I know I am, but thanks for noticing ..lol. Great job as always, Eric!

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  14. Great poem Eric, great imagery and very different.

    Anita.

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  15. Give me the diamonds, u keep the dynamite!

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  16. Nicely paired up words in this piece, Eric.

    Pamela

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  17. Loved it! The dangerous wordplay. Manifique! spelled my way... hehe nice one!

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  18. UR a gem fashioned under intense pressure with an explosive quality I might add. Nice one shot.

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  19. UR
    amazing talent
    writing poems I adore!

    Ahh... that multi-faceted thing called love... what a superb poem, Eric!

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