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March 3, 2011

Desire:55

I feel the heat
Each time that we meet

She stokes that flame
When she calls out my name

I start to smolder
Every time that I hold her

I hear it start hissing
Whenever we start kissing

I feel the burn
As we both start to yearn

I feel the fire
Overcome by desire

26 comments:

  1. smoking...got a little fire in mine as well...keep it stoked man!

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  2. Baby keep that fire going... Must be cold in MI!!!

    Happy weekend

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  3. Tight lyrical lines and the rhymes are dead on. Think I might "borrow" this 55 for my next Valentines Day card. lol Awesome.

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  4. I'll stop and listen
    when I hear the hissin'.
    'Cuz for Pete's sake
    it just could be a snake.

    As long as I'm alive
    I've read nary a finer 55.

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  5. This sounds like a love ballad from the 60's.
    Bubba and the Bobbleheads...
    Most excellent 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  6. love that, Bubba and the Bobbleheads!
    or Bubbleheads. or Rubbernecks. or, ah, never mind.
    yay!

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  7. Nice! To keep feeling that desire is wonderful.

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  8. Put some beats behind that rhyme! Tight! And smokin'! Great job.

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  9. hummmmm hawt and nice and easy to read- love the rhyme and that desire of yours... Eric!
    :)

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  10. Overcome by desire - Time for me to go home to my wife! Well done.

    Rockets and Wings is my 55 this week.

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  11. Ah! the desires and the acts leading to it .. lovely write ..

    hows ya doing ... I know i been away from this place for quite a time ..

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  12. Like Ami said, give that a beat!

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  13. Oooo, Baby. You DO have a way with words. I love how you get right to the heart of matters. Your poem-song could be a freaking #1 hit -- I swear!!

    xoxo

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  14. Beat, beat, beat... and here I was thinking it couldn't be beat - LOL!

    I'll sing it if somebody plays the melody for me.

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  15. blushing...
    what a sweet 55.
    well done plots.

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  16. Wwhhheeeww! Hot and sensuous!! I heard the drums go thump thump thump... oh no wait.. that was my heart!!
    A vivid 55, Eric!! Nicely done!

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  17. I think you could rap this one, eric. Hook up with brian cuz I think he's been hangin out at the open mic nights lately :)

    btw, I have an award for you on my blog today, at http://sheila-moore.blogspot.com

    have a super weekend!

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  18. I think you wrapped it just in time. Like . . before you started "pushing your luck"

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  19. Wow! Sounds like you got more than the rhyming mastered! :)

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  20. Awesome rhythm and rhyme for 55 words! :) Love it!

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