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October 15, 2010

Friday 55: Just Hell

Hell is a place that has no music
Just a loud ringing that fills your ear

Hell is a place that has no color
Just deep darkness filled with fear

Hell is a place that has no love
Just hearts replaced with holes

Hell is a place that has no life
Just lost tormented souls




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35 comments:

  1. Hell is a place where many dwell
    becos they barter their soul with a empty shell

    extraction

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  2. Yikes, sounds like my marriage.

    I'm always impressed when someone manages verse and poetry in 55 -- I don't think I could tackle more than simple prose!

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  3. i really dont want to verify your facts...smiles. nice 55.

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  4. sometimes i think hell has the music my son listens to at the moment....smiles...

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  5. I hope I never get to confirm this - the ringing alone would do me in!

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  6. Please, I don't waaaaaana go to hell. Ever. Or as Brian says, verify your facts. Or as perhaps I am picking up from Claudia, listen to her son's music.

    Please, can I go to heaven?? I've been a (mostly) good girl and plan on keeping on doing good things! :)

    xo

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  7. Don't worry about Hell, people... I'm sure when we die our spirits rejoin the Great Energy and we'll finally have no worries nor questions anymore.

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  8. Hell no, we won't go. Hell is a religious creation to keep the masses in line. Your comment in probably more accurate, but no one knows for certain. Great 55.

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  9. Very neat verses - succinct and telling. No heaven, no hell - just stardust :-)

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  10. You give such a vivid description I really hope I don't go to hell. :(

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  11. Hmmm a place I don't want to go to any time soon. :) Great 55 my friend. :) Have a great weekend :)

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  12. Hell is a place with no books!!!

    Great post. Blessings!

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  13. That's a wonderful 55, Eric. Well done.

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  14. Hell Michigan by Pinckney?

    I Know Bubba...hehehehe
    Your 55 was most poetic My friend.
    Darkly great!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End.

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  15. Makes me so glad I don't believe in hell! You paint quite a picture of torment. Nicely done.

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  16. Interesting description of hell... a nice 55er ... I like Claudia's comment about the music,
    I was hoping 'hell' had good music and chocolates, just encase St Peter doesn't open the gate.

    Cheers,
    Joanny

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  17. agree with your definition.
    beautiful 55.

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  18. only a penny? well hell. OOps. Great poem- great blog...I'll be back! Cheers

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  19. A wonderful 55 Eric, not a place I want to be my friend. Take care my friend x Hugs xx

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  20. My faith makes me want to quote scripture, but I am never one to force my beliefs on others. :-)

    Very well said, the emptiness and pain can be felt in your words.

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  21. So it's a lot like normal life, then.

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  22. Reminds me of the fantasy Book "Inferno" I read as a teen...
    (part of Hell seems to be here already!)
    Like your wrap up lines

    btw- I'm zipping along on someone elses newer puter today

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  23. Ug and Yikes! Makes me glad I don't believe in that place...

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  24. Sounds like hell. Except for the rhyming. Hell is probably pro-discord and anti-rhyme and reason. Nice 55.

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  25. deerist bubba eric, hi!

    yoo remembir me --blue bunny,my jannies blogg manijir?

    just poping and hoping in to say hello and i iz so sorree yoo did not win we songs cd -- mebee nexist time!!

    ox

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  26. I hope I don't end up in hell. :(

    Fabulous 55.

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  27. Fire and brimstone pit? Doubtful. I think hell is a vast, black, endless void sans warmth, light, or sensation of any kind but eternal loneliness.

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  28. A Hell post. Really. I thought you had issues there....not in Hell, but about Hell's very existence. I like it just the same.

    My 55 is HERE .

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  29. Sounds like my job...where the words of employees are heard as...the sound of silence.

    Nicely done for such a dark topic.

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  30. sounds like a place where i used to work

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