... seeing things a bit differently.
What a great poem! The form your words took on the page *completely* made it come alive for me... (hahaha!!)-C
sometimes i think it indeed makes them more poetic...smiles - like yours with the nice shape...smiles
Well, the theory goes something like this: nah, I'm noteven gonnatry.
Playing with word placement is fun - as is evidenced by your poem :)
very creative,your pink poem is cool.;)
You may put in your 2¢ worth, but I'll only pay you a penny for your thoughts.