... seeing things a bit differently.
We are all in sweet oblivion.
the line about no one noticing...it got me...so sad. nice form though...enjoyed it...
Oh wow! Thanks for directing me hear. . . "the truth denied. . . " indeed.
I liked the line "mental fingers grasp for knobs"I'm like that when I wake in the night, I can't see without my contacts and I mentally stumble through the house. Nice imagery.....
If ignorance is bliss, what on earth is oblivion?!?!?!Loved this, Eric... I kinda drifted along with it... it's a good state to be in... (sigh)
I thank you Eric for sharing this with me. It is an awesome piece and somehow is related to my own! :)
An intriguing poem,something out of the ordinary
This piece lends a sense of something restful to be found in giving up earthly woes and relenting to the peace of "sweet oblivion".Wonderful poem and stunning photograph...Lynettehttp://imaginationlane.blogspot.com/2011/02/my-first-microfiction-monday.html
mental fingers..ghosts in allover your lines.creepy indeed.well done.
We all live such moments .. and some make it their life !
Oh ghostly passing without notice..mental fingers...oh my...bkm
Beautifully done. Almost puts me in a trance.
your piece was very captivating...I loved it. Stunning imagery as well...nicely done! xo
'A dimly recognised lack of focus'..... you pinned-down the experience.
Interesting theme - and well explored.
Eric, this can happen sometimes and in myhumble opinion, it isn't always a bad place to be:)Pamela
"mental fingers grasp for knobs..." love that image! Nicely done and a cool pic too!
Wow, I kind of did it similar to you~ I liked itWell Done~ Love the images that arrived and the photo sets the mood~
This is great and I really like the form. The form seems like ghostly floating..one line at a time. Just nuances speak louder than words sometimes.
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