Atrocious Jones, skin and bones
speaks only in grunts and groans
Dark as coal in a deep hole
never helped a single soul
Malicious man grabs what he can
stealing everything is his plan
Ignorant, sly, watering eye
violence is his reply
Hate and greed is all he needs
as he turns to evil deeds
Atrocious Jones, sticks and stones
draws out precious blood and moans
That's pretty cool.
ReplyDeleteCan I borrow that (with credit given of course) for my husband's headstone?
ReplyDeleteOr no wait -- it's too cool for the likes of him. I loved it!
I love the rhythm of your words, very beautiful flow.
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ReplyDeleteawards for you,
3 poetry,
2 general..
Happy Monday!