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June 28, 2010

On-High

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You took me up to Heaven with you
we soared through the clouds on gilded wings
and beheld the glory below us


We brushed the feet of angels
and watched the sun dip below the horizon
beneath a curtain of pink and gold


We saw the Earth slowly turning
and I felt such peace, there on-high
knowing you were there with me


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27 comments:

  1. sounds like a trip I would also enjoy :)

    lovely peom

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  2. smiles. what a magical journey...you know that scene in superman when he is looking down on the earth...yeah. nice one shot!

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  3. nice one shot Eric..:) and thanks for stopping by at my sanctuary..always welcomed..:)

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  4. LOvely.So warm.Can feel love all over it!Must be great to be in heaven with a loved one with you.

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  5. This is so beautiful. I just love it.

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  6. Very nice you can feel the love of being together...on heaven and earth...bkm

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  7. Nice one shot Eric, I enjoyed reading it.. thanks

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  8. How did you get up there Eric? Next time call me.

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  9. How sweet! Magical journeys and love. Always a great combo. =3

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  10. Well done, Eric. Can relate and nice descriptions you use.

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  11. Magical. I suspect it is something like this that lures a person to take flying lessons.

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  12. brushed the feet of angels...love that line!

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  13. lovely, but somehow made me sad. I felt like it was a remembering of a love lost

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  14. ~~~Lovely~~~ a serene piece, nice shot

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  15. Your Hiakus are great! So is this poem! :)

    Sounds like a moment of enlightenment or the embarkation on the eternal Journey

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  16. a beautiful journey shared...thanks oete

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  17. Eric,
    This is so beautiful. I felt like I was floating.
    Pamela

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  18. A wonderful piece that lifted me up on gentle wings so that I too could brush 'the feet of angels'...just lovely!

    Lynette

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  19. Something beautiful and amazing popped into your head Eric!! You are a poet indeed! :-)

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  20. Ah, beautiful. So spiritual. Thanks for it.

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  21. You filled my head with a swirl of beautiful images. Lovely.

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  22. Eric,
    A very peaceful and gentle read.
    Lovely words...

    Eileen

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  23. what lovely pictures you word-painted for me - thank you

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  24. We saw the Earth slowly turning
    and I felt such peace, there on-high
    knowing you were there with me

    that's super cheerful and lovely fly.
    sweet and smart entry,
    from poets united.

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