- for my friend, Aaron 
I knew a young rapscallion 
who rode a painted mare 
his wry smile widened slightly 
as the breeze blew back his hair 
His swagger showed of cockiness 
this self-sure lad with charm 
and rarely did he walk the street 
without some young girl’s arm 
But soon he felt too restless 
and wanted something more 
some Indians were calling and 
the clown was getting sore 
He rode his horse around and ‘round 
then sauntered off to sea 
to find some new adventures there 
and left me sipping tea 
For many years he traveled ‘round 
and tempted every Fate 
he even dueled the devil once 
just outside of Hell’s gate 
I never knew where he had been
until the other day 
a letter said that he was back 
and coming home to stay 
I met him at a local pub 
and we drank many beers 
his hair was shorter, grayer too 
his face now showed the years 
But he is a rapscallion still 
with still the sharpest wit 
tho’ time has slowed his body some 
this rogue, he just won’t quit 
So, sirs, warn your fine young daughters 
and lock up all of your wine 
for neither will be saved from that 
rapscallion friend of mine
 
Loved it, and so will your rogue friend! Excellent rhyming.
ReplyDeletethis was really fun eric...kinda like a folk tale....melodic too...nice one shot!
ReplyDeleteI love the tale, but I find the typos a bit distracting.
ReplyDelete"showed of" should be "showed off"
"rouge" should be "rogue"
Fix those, and the poem will shine even more. Good one shot.
"His swagger showed of cockiness" means that his cockiness showed in his swagger, not that he was showing off his cockiness.
ReplyDeleteRouge was a typo that spell-check didn't notice because it's a legitimate word. (I fixed it)
Nice. Reminded me somehow of Longfellow's "The Village Blacksmith" which I had to make my sister memorize for school. I of course ended up learning it too...anyway, this piece had a nice rhythm and great rhyme (I HATE forced rhyme, and this was not). Thanks for stopping by at Life is Good!
ReplyDeletefun and cool write eric - did you read it to aaron?
ReplyDeleteWell Claudia, I didn't actually read it to him, but I did e-mail it to him.
ReplyDeleteLock up your daughters and wine cellars, eh? I kinda wanna see this rapscallion friend o'yours. Fun one shot!
ReplyDeleteI'll have to find a picture, although I don't have any that are recent.
ReplyDeleteThis is terrific, Eric. A great story, in rhyme and all with a wonderful rhythm. I really liked it.
ReplyDeletehaha! Great Oneshot!
ReplyDeleteLock up the wine you say?
With devil may care attitude,
I sip and slurp
my chardonnay
Made me smile!!Sure won't want any unfortunate girls to cross your friends,path.HAHA!!Lovely!
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun poem! I think I might have met your friend, or a rapscallion just like him!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful... I enjoyed reading it... thanks for sharing...
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
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It read like a song - the bad boy song - that all girls love and then run from. Lovely to read, and fun. For some reason I kept picturing Johnny Depp. Thanks for coming by my site. Gay @beachanny
ReplyDeleteHa ha, that is a fun poem. Who wouldn;t want to be a rapscallion? That poem reminded me of Jack Sparrow in Pirates of the CArribean.
ReplyDeleteJaunty, solid work.
ReplyDeleteLoved it.. it was like a short story in some ways. great shot~~`
ReplyDeleteoh i love this. why is it that i wanna meet all your friends?!
ReplyDeleteLOVE the word rapscallion... yay!
I don't have daughters to lock up, but the wine cellar is already with a chain :) Nice one Eric!
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