Followers

November 1, 2013

Autumn Seeping

Autumn seeping down
Leaves falling to ground

Deep crimson and gold
Overtaking green’s hold

But losing, at the last
To brown’s fatal cast


5 comments:

  1. Other MaryNovember 1, 2013 at 10:53 AM

    That sums it up succinctly!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Brian MillerNovember 1, 2013 at 11:19 AM

    nice progression and capture of progression...a beautiful bit of dying....

    ReplyDelete
  3. MaryNovember 1, 2013 at 6:39 PM

    I really like this poem. It is a perfect description of the way autumn is.

    ReplyDelete
  4. AnonymousNovember 1, 2013 at 7:05 PM

    You said it the way it is--very nice.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Yvonne OsborneNovember 2, 2013 at 8:58 PM

    Green's hold is loosened!

    ReplyDelete

You may put in your 2¢ worth, but I'll only pay you a penny for your thoughts.

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)