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January 30, 2012

Just Another Day

While the boy
day-dreams
like he is ever
just a clown

While the girl
sits and screams
like she has ever
worn a crown

While the fan
always seems
like it is ever
slowing down

While the sun
stretches beams
like it is ever
gonna drown

5 comments:

  1. Sylvia KJanuary 30, 2012 at 11:51 AM

    Yep, just another day indeed! Great one for the day, Eric!

    Sylvia

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  2. Wine and WordsJanuary 30, 2012 at 12:05 PM

    I cannot write rhyming poetry because I just find it too limiting for my irratic thoughts :) but you do a mighty fine job here. A very interesting arc.

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  3. Sharon DayJanuary 30, 2012 at 1:31 PM

    Oh, that was wonderful-what a beautiful cadence, felt very down-the-stairsteps feel.

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  4. CadJanuary 31, 2012 at 5:23 AM

    This is almost a meditation...

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  5. ninotazizFebruary 2, 2012 at 11:13 AM

    Looks effortless - but what a lovely poem!

    And how looks can be so deceiving...

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