I faced the great plain
Grasses to the horizon
The sun rose as I sang my song
To the Four Winds
I sang out my name and
Sang of my tribe
I sang of my ancestors
My father and grandfathers
On the wind I heard
A bone flute playing far away
Then I closed my eyes
And in my mind I saw
The smoke of a thousand fires
Coming like a great heard of buffalo
The thick, gray clouds hid the grasslands
And I could not see
I heard screaming and running and crying
Many who were confused, lost and afraid
And I called out to them
To come towards my voice
Slowly, through the smoke
I saw many animals approaching me
Deer and squirrels and rabbits
Coyotes and bears and hawks
All manner of creatures
Running from the smoke
Suddenly they all cried out,
“Save us! Save us from the smoke!”
Then I opened my eyes
And saw only the grassy plain before me
No animals and no smoke
No running or crying or screaming
So I turned away
To walk back to my people
Beautiful. I love the sacredness of it.
ReplyDeleteTouching... I have Cherokee descendants and this made me think of them.
ReplyDeleteawesome gave me goosebumps
ReplyDeleteI like the way you followed the song here- I have had views similar to this it was hard to know if a dream, vision , memory- cool!
ReplyDeleteInteresting--especially the ending--it seems like it needs one more line...that they weren't there either--just has a ghostly feel to me, but yours is perhaps a more positive take than that.
ReplyDeleteLooks like a dream of one's redemption...enjoyed the reflective write ~
ReplyDeletevery spiritual for me. enjoyed it
ReplyDeleteI think this is my very favorite of yours, Eric. I could visualize the whole thing.......beautiful.
ReplyDeletevery dreamlike
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