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October 7, 2011

Lady Of The Night (55)

She was a melting Jezebel
The original crime-less victim

A witch who dropped her wand
Had lost her magic; powerless

No rhythm in her steps
Nor music in her soul

But always looking
For a new dance partner

Always wanting to make
New memories to help her

Forget the painful past
Replace them, erase them

20 comments:

  1. Vivienne MossOctober 7, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    A wonderfuly magical poem. Thanks for sharing.

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  2. Brian MillerOctober 7, 2011 at 10:59 AM

    as she will die a lonely and wornout woman...

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  3. MargaretOctober 7, 2011 at 11:16 AM

    a melting Jezebel... loved that!

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  4. Monkey ManOctober 7, 2011 at 11:22 AM

    Sad tale. We chose our own destiny.

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  5. gautami tripathyOctober 7, 2011 at 11:25 AM

    Melting Jezebel.....that kinda melted me!!

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  6. Julie FergusonOctober 7, 2011 at 11:40 AM

    Just lovely...

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  7. Alice AudreyOctober 7, 2011 at 12:47 PM

    Sounds like something a lot of women have been.

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  8. MarionOctober 7, 2011 at 12:56 PM

    Damn, Bubba, give the woman her magic power back!!! (Abracadabra.....POOF!) There!! xo

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  9. Jannie FunsterOctober 7, 2011 at 1:49 PM

    Could autumn be the Jezebel melting all the pretty summer to brown?

    Very very interesting 55.

    I like it a lot!

    xo

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  10. Jannie FunsterOctober 7, 2011 at 1:49 PM

    Could autumn be the Jezebel melting all the pretty summer to brown?

    Very very interesting 55.

    I like it a lot!

    xo

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  11. Wine and WordsOctober 7, 2011 at 2:07 PM

    Can't erase the past, or forget it. But you can make new memories that lay across old wounds like fresh skin.

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  12. Sharon DayOctober 7, 2011 at 2:47 PM

    Nothing worse than losing one's wand.

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  13. SheilaOctober 7, 2011 at 5:38 PM

    quit writing about me (smiles) Seriously, this is really, really good.

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  14. TimoteoOctober 7, 2011 at 9:17 PM

    I like the way you turned "victimless crime" around to describe her.

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  15. AnonymousOctober 7, 2011 at 9:46 PM

    very much enjoyed this 55... hmmm, did I drop my wand ~

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  16. G-ManOctober 7, 2011 at 11:40 PM

    Is this about George Michael?
    Very Nicely Written Eric
    Loved your 55
    Thanks for being such a big help today
    You Rock
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  17. anthonynorthOctober 8, 2011 at 3:22 AM

    Sad but beautifully done.

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  18. LydiaOctober 8, 2011 at 6:38 AM

    I cannot tell you how much the ending means to me right now. 55 gold stars to you, Bubba.

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  19. Maude LynnOctober 8, 2011 at 12:59 PM

    Excellent write, Eric.

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  20. Doctor FTSEOctober 9, 2011 at 2:22 AM

    I liked the "crime-less victim"

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