Day 3: Backyard Stump
Once there was an apple tree
that grew in my backyard
The tree was thin and not too tall
and took the winters hard
It had not been pruned properly
while it was first growing
All the apples it produced
had spots and wrinkles showing
The tree grew too close to the house
and overhung the gutter
Each autumn the leaves would fall
and fill it full of clutter
It didn’t give a lot of shade
on hot sticky summer days
Since the apples all fell to rot
no one would sit there anyways
We didn’t like the mushy mess
of apples on our lawn
So we cut down the apple tree
and now the mess is gone
Apple trees need proper care
and planning that is sound
All that’s left now is a stump
with green grass all around
nice capture eric...yes we need to take care when we bring life into this world...trees or otherwise...
ReplyDeleteLooks like the base of a nice back yard table. Love these written visuals.
ReplyDeleteWe had a tree just like this in the backyard when I was growing up.
ReplyDeleteI don't know if this is funny or tragic. I feel a strong sense of both. Fantastic writing.
ReplyDeleteIt really was a shame to have to cut down that little apple tree. It was pretty, but was planted too close to the house - a common mistake.
ReplyDeleteIt had never received the attention in the pruning department, so it grew gnarled and the fruits were always small and deformed.
I have always wanted an apple tree. Maybe you could plant another one away from your house.
ReplyDeleteI love the poem even though it makes me sad.
Even an apple tree needs lovin'.
ReplyDeleteUsed to have a fairly good-sized orchard, with lots of apple trees. And BOY! One year nobody tended to them, and we had "worm-trees". Smelled good, though!
ReplyDeleteWrong time, wrong place - poor tree! ♥
ReplyDeletePlanting trees too close to a building happens quite often. Even professional landscapers do it! It's sad for the tree and for the people who don't get to enjoy its beauty.
ReplyDeleteWell written.
everything related to trees is cool.
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i think there's analogy here... it's not mere about tree... :)
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