Woods Ablaze
I ventured forth in autumn brisk
the sunlight made me smile
I took a walk to find a place
to linger for awhile
I stepped into the woods ablaze
and marveled at the sight
The colors that surrounded me
filled my heart with delight
Yellow gold and crimson red
the leaves they all were burning
The white birch trees reached so high
I almost felt them yearning
Dark evergreens brought sharp relief
against the leaves so bright
And on that day in woods ablaze
the world just seemed so right
I love this!!! You caught the magic og Autumn is a beautiful prose. Thanks for the smile this brought to my face.
ReplyDeleteThat world sounds all right to me! Lucky boy! Our cacti do not cooperate with colors here, especially when we're still in the 90s.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem! It captured the beauty of fall. I've really been enjoying all the colors and changing leaves. It is almost magical to walk through a forest during this time of year!
ReplyDeleteI love fall. The poem and photo capture exactly why, perfect.
ReplyDeleteAutumnal Bliss at it's best Bubba...Thanks
ReplyDeleteI love the autumn colors in nature.
ReplyDeletetight writing and I love those shots looking up throught the leaved window to the sky
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ReplyDeleteI adore the ending. Beautiful capture of the atmosphere of Autumn.
ReplyDeleteIsn't autumn so beautiful, when you get to see all the fabulous colours and smell that earthly smell of it all.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful write from you :)
magical walk with you here,
ReplyDeleteway to go.
:)
A beautiful description of autumn and all its' colours.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, I love autumn!! Great job. Blessings, Terri
ReplyDeleteperfect! wonderfully written!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem - I love it ;)
ReplyDeleteGorgeous photo and wonderfully descriptive poem; you took me back to the city park in Springfield, MA. :)
ReplyDeleteA fun, tranquil poem. A nice way to start the day :-)
ReplyDeleteWonderful tale and great rhythm and rhyme.
ReplyDeleteHere is my entry:
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/10/this-is-my-mug.html
Your words convey that world that seemed so right! Lovely!
ReplyDeletethis is excellent and so well written I enjoyed it so much
ReplyDeletehttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/20/taken-from-me-on-halloween-night/
what a beautiful imagery... beautifully worded
ReplyDeleteVery excellently penned poetry...Got the whole picture of Autumn in front of eye friend...Thanks for share...
ReplyDeleteheart warming words.
ReplyDeletelove the imagery.
lovely....
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful! Your words were put together so gracefully.
ReplyDeleteI have just been out in the woods with my camera and you put to pen my thoughts exactly.
ReplyDeleteThanks
ReplyDeleteZQ
beautiful autumnal impressions
ReplyDeletethe color of your poem gives one warmth, very beautiful piece of poetry.
ReplyDeletepoem on.