... seeing things a bit differently.
go sexy rictameter! bravo!
Thank you, Marian!The inspiration for this hit me in the shower this morning, coindicentally.
oh wow! Awesome!
(That idea came from my shower too, Brian - LOL!)
Very nice form, and a well-written piece as well--but as far as the nipples--I'm not going there. ;_)
wow...bingle...your words dance with power...well done..A++
Oh yeah .....
huwee! thats hot! here's my potluck for this week: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/08/04/here-for-you/
Hey - that's a great rictameter! Reading it made my toes tingle! :o)
Quite the sexed-up write.I like this form Eric.
a-hem...you. must. explain. rictameter. if for no other reason but to know why I'm suddenly so flustered!
Here's the layout for a Rictameter:• line 1 - 2 syllables (same as line 9)• line 2 - 4 syllables • line 3 - 6 syllables • line 4 - 8 syllables • line 5 - 10 syllables • line 6 - 8 syllables • line 7 - 6 syllables • line 8 - 4 syllables • line 9 - 2 syllables (same as line 1)(But that's not why you're so flustered, dear) ;)
Great form. Great images. So many flashes of genius are born in the shower.
It's such fun learning something new in the realm of writing! I must try this. Thanks Eric!
awesome, i haven't tried a rictameter yet!here’s my PL pieces:http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/01/21/the-pages/http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/01/15/sonnet-vi/http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/01/23/its-a-wonder-fuckin-life/
ahem ahem uhm...yeah, oh! very nice! :-)Happy potluck!http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
interesting on the metric side, exhilarating on the "been there done that" side, and just plain good reading with my coffee this morning. Thanks Eric!
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