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January 24, 2011

Tingle (My first rictameter)

Tingle


Pretzel-salty


Intuitive notion


The rush in a hint of danger


Hot shower water washes over you


A sudden loudness startling


The thrill of the unknown


Erect nipples


Tingle

18 comments:

  1. MarianJanuary 24, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    go sexy rictameter! bravo!

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  2. BubbaJanuary 24, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    Thank you, Marian!

    The inspiration for this hit me in the shower this morning, coindicentally.

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  3. UnknownJanuary 24, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    oh wow! Awesome!

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  4. Brian MillerJanuary 24, 2011 at 11:08 AM

    erect nipples....nice...

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  5. BubbaJanuary 24, 2011 at 11:10 AM

    (That idea came from my shower too, Brian - LOL!)

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  6. hedgewitchJanuary 24, 2011 at 11:21 AM

    Very nice form, and a well-written piece as well--but as far as the nipples--I'm not going there. ;_)

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  7. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJanuary 24, 2011 at 11:45 AM

    wow...

    bingle...

    your words dance with power...
    well done..

    A++

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  8. HelenJanuary 24, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    Oh yeah .....

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 24, 2011 at 12:55 PM

    huwee! thats hot! here's my potluck for this week: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/08/04/here-for-you/

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  10. Other MaryJanuary 24, 2011 at 2:10 PM

    Hey - that's a great rictameter! Reading it made my toes tingle! :o)

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  11. flaubertJanuary 24, 2011 at 2:18 PM

    Quite the sexed-up write.
    I like this form Eric.

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  12. UnknownJanuary 24, 2011 at 4:15 PM

    a-hem...you. must. explain. rictameter.

    if for no other reason but to know why I'm suddenly so flustered!

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  13. BubbaJanuary 24, 2011 at 4:30 PM

    Here's the layout for a Rictameter:

    • line 1 - 2 syllables (same as line 9)
    • line 2 - 4 syllables
    • line 3 - 6 syllables
    • line 4 - 8 syllables
    • line 5 - 10 syllables
    • line 6 - 8 syllables
    • line 7 - 6 syllables
    • line 8 - 4 syllables
    • line 9 - 2 syllables (same as line 1)


    (But that's not why you're so flustered, dear) ;)

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  14. AnonymousJanuary 24, 2011 at 4:30 PM

    Great form. Great images. So many flashes of genius are born in the shower.

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  15. UnknownJanuary 24, 2011 at 4:52 PM

    It's such fun learning something new in the realm of writing! I must try this. Thanks Eric!

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  16. AnonymousJanuary 24, 2011 at 5:17 PM

    awesome, i haven't tried a rictameter yet!
    here’s my PL pieces:
    http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/01/21/the-pages/
    http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/01/15/sonnet-vi/
    http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/01/23/its-a-wonder-fuckin-life/

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  17. AnonymousJanuary 25, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    ahem ahem uhm...yeah, oh! very nice! :-)
    Happy potluck!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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  18. Scott M. FreyJanuary 26, 2011 at 6:52 AM

    interesting on the metric side, exhilarating on the "been there done that" side, and just plain good reading with my coffee this morning. Thanks Eric!

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