Two hearts, a whole world apart
Yet beat in syncopated rhythm
Twin like-minds, so rare to find
Amidst all of these differences
Souls in pairs, with love to share
Though never meeting in person
Mirrored feelings, emotions reeling
A global connection in syncopation
Beautiful Eric!
ReplyDeleteOooo! Nice! I like the rhyme-deal, and your poem does what it says! And I am over-using exclamation points, but this is very good Eric. :o)
ReplyDeletesmiles. neat when you meet someone with such a similar heart...
ReplyDeleteEric. I didn't know you felt that way. *blushes*
ReplyDeletemmmm.... i like that.
ReplyDelete.... turn the beat around! I appreciate syncopation in music ... and your poem.
ReplyDeleteNeva - Coming from you, that's quite a compliment!
ReplyDeleteMary - Now I just need to come up with a name for that rhyming scheme (if there's not one already).
Brian - Yes it is... I hope everybody meets that person in their lives.
Monkey Man - You know I can't hide my true feelings. (LOL!)
Kay - I liked the way you said "mmmm..." - just the kind of response I like to generate.
Helen - Yes, music flows so much better when there's an inherant balance between the rhythm, melody and harmony.
Thanks for the kind words, everybody!
Is it odd – but I have been one of these hearts in one of those situations. I believe it can work – though it takes work and trust. Great job!!
ReplyDeleteThis love through the other media... really exists
ReplyDeleteGreat one! Eric...
:)
Indeed it can and does happen...
ReplyDeletelovely words here:-
Those people are the lucky ones...
ReplyDeleteI, for one, believe in it...
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..a global connection in syncopation.... sums it up beautifully :-)
ReplyDeleteEric
ReplyDeleteIt seems the women agree with you here, as I do , it does exist,, truly it does...you must have experienced this as well? for your poem captures the essence nicely.
joanny
I love finding kindred spirits a half a planet away- such as from New Zealand...
ReplyDeleteWithout internet the inspiration here wouldn't be-
And blogging has certainly made this a reality occurring more onften than we think possible.
ReplyDeleteif this is a new poetic form, you should submit it to Writer's Digest's contest. If you are interested email me if you can't find it on their website. deadline isn't until Feb.
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