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May 10, 2010

I’m Here To Clean Up The Mess

(More of a country song than a poem.  Maybe someday I'll come up with a melody for it)


I can tell by the things you do
That someone made a mess of you
Broke your trust and your heart too
Left you in rough shape, it’s true


I’m here to clean up the mess
I’ll treat you better than the rest
Take a chance on me and then you’ll see
Put me to the test...
I’m here to clean up the mess


Listen girl, it ain’t no lie
I ain’t like that other guy
Give me a try and you’ll know why
I’ll warm your heart and make you sigh


I’m here to clean up the mess
I’ll treat you better than the rest
Take a chance on me and then you’ll see
Put me to the test...
I’m here to clean up the mess


So if you’re tired of feeling blue
Take a chance with someone new
We’ll go dance, have a beer or two
I’d be proud just to be with you


I’m here to clean up the mess
I’ll treat you better than the rest
Take a chance on me and then you’ll see
Put me to the test...
I’m here to clean up the mess

12 comments:

  1. What a beautiful attempt on bringing someone closer to you.. I think it ca turn out to be a good song.. must be humming already.. aint it.. Well done..

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  2. how i wish i can tell this and they believe haha!

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  3. Loved it, the repeat of the verses is like a chorus for a song. Put it to music????

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  4. Very sweet-- and you MUST put it to music!

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  5. I’m here to clean up the mess
    I’ll treat you better than the rest
    Take a chance on me and then you’ll see
    Put me to the test...
    I’m here to clean up the mess..


    you are a true romantic,
    Eric, she is lucky to have you ...

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  6. I wish there was someone with such beautiful words, to clean the mess for me when I needed it! Lovely!

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  7. How sweet! There are so many out there that need someone to clean up the mess.

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  8. Worthy of a song in my mind this one my friend!!! Awesome xxx

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  9. Amazing...a lovely romantic song...
    I love it... :)

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  10. A nice write! It's so much classier than my usual pick up line of "so, am I sexy enough for you or should I buy you another beer first?"

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  11. This reads like a song. And who wouldn't love someone who's willing to clean up the mess?

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