... seeing things a bit differently.
Now that would be worthy of love-- nicely written!
Beginning each verse with "I want..." really does create a haunting effect. Nice, Eric.Victoria
wow,a romantic man you are,these words touch, heartfelt sentiments,skillfully done..cheers!
I just love this one--ghostly and romantic all at once! Nicely done.
Wow...are you in love?Your poems are superb...
Simple and overt yet perfectly pure in intent - great!
love this. do you want to encourage or discourage the committing of the sins? i'm hopeful for the former. ;)
I purposely left that ambiguous, so readers would decide for themselves. (Consciously or otherwise)
You may put in your 2¢ worth, but I'll only pay you a penny for your thoughts.