August 7, 2013


If I prick a single finger
Squeeze out red drops
To write words of love
Would you take note?

If I cut across my hand
And let it trickle down
Pink streaming feelings
Might you be impressed?

Maybe if I slit my wrist
And watched it flow out
A ruddy pool of emotion
Would that even move you?

Or slash at my jugular vein
And gush forth in crimson
Everything deep inside
Could you love me then?

1 comment:

  1. A possible last line or title, "Could you love me more?"


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