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August 8, 2011

Intangible

Do you ever feel just a little off
Different, like a church at night
Somehow not quite the same

Perhaps there’s just a little cough
Or something not exactly right
Something you can’t quite name

7 comments:

  1. Sharon DayAugust 8, 2011 at 10:40 AM

    Welcome to my days. That was a brilliant insight. You notice things most people either don't notice or don't put to words.

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  2. Tulika VermaAugust 8, 2011 at 10:52 AM

    You say the deepest of things in such simple and few words! You have the gift of poetry! :)

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  3. MarionAugust 8, 2011 at 10:56 AM

    I'm waaaaaay off and happy to be. Great poem!!

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  4. Julie FergusonAugust 8, 2011 at 11:50 AM

    I feel that way often.

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  5. Rachel HoytAugust 8, 2011 at 4:44 PM

    Yes, yes and YES. Did I say yes? :oP

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  6. SheilaAugust 9, 2011 at 12:15 PM

    I always feel this way but at the same time, I know I am not unique either :)

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  7. Judy RoneyAugust 9, 2011 at 10:32 PM

    I have felt this way..something not quite right. Usually I'm coming down with something that hasn't shown itself yet. Blah days. Nice description..like a church at night.

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