You
… sighing wind in summer trees
You
… pale lilac scent in the breeze
You
… bright sun shining in my eyes
You
… spicy-sweet cinnamon surprise
You
… sundress-silhouetted by bright rays
You
… my pulse quickens, my mind strays
You
… soft laugh and infectious smile
You
… stay beside me just for awhile
You
… the song I hear in my heart
You
… skips on Cupid’s narrow dart
You
… a million little miracles all tied-up in
You
aw! happy valentine's day. xoxo
ReplyDeleteOh, that's so sweet! Yes, I'm sure you don't have any bodies to bury, lol ;-) Thanks for reading my crazy poem though!
ReplyDeleteExcellent, like the structuring.
ReplyDeletejust commenting again because i want to! i feel so free up in here!
ReplyDeletecomment comment comment. did i mention i like this poem?
I wonder who that "you" is.. very romantique.
ReplyDeleteI like the simple, straight forward feel of this piece...feels authentic...and authenticity in a love poem is sublime
ReplyDeletehappy late V-Day and have a wonderful One Shot!
Best (real) LOVE poem I've read so far, Eric!
ReplyDeleteThank you all for the wonderful comments.
ReplyDeleteOh what a sweet love poem....this would be perfect on a Valentine Card....nice Eric...bkm
ReplyDeleteThis is a sweet one.. bringing along hopeful gestures.. :)
ReplyDeleteSpicy sweet cinnamon- can I get some here?
Love xx
Aww...how very sweet is that, Eric!!
ReplyDeleteAnd just when I temporarily shifted gears to "grim", you decide to go romantic, huh?!?! :)
Awwww, VERY sweet! Beautifully written. :)
ReplyDeletelove this one, eric. I like the formatting, too... especially the emphasis on the word YOU and the way it really facilitated pronounced saccades as I read it.
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