tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post6592571020267504088..comments2023-11-03T04:59:24.008-04:00Comments on Bubba's Place: The SurgingBubbahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-2801428625123041452011-03-16T19:38:15.102-04:002011-03-16T19:38:15.102-04:00Good, relatable piece.Good, relatable piece.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-68804861168944412962011-03-12T07:50:07.991-05:002011-03-12T07:50:07.991-05:00Hi Eric
Its very lovely.. I enjoyed reading this ...Hi Eric<br /><br />Its very lovely.. I enjoyed reading this one...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-memories-from-living.html<br />At Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-26243482337956115082011-03-09T15:05:17.514-05:002011-03-09T15:05:17.514-05:00working with industrial electricity, this one warm...working with industrial electricity, this one warmed me in reading :) and somebody before me said it well. . .just stay grounded, friend :)<br /><br />monty / bummyMontyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17446385166445251013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-37098314036249089312011-03-09T12:49:54.630-05:002011-03-09T12:49:54.630-05:00I'm missing my muse at present... Great write....I'm missing my muse at present... Great write.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-5009815248706096722011-03-09T12:07:19.029-05:002011-03-09T12:07:19.029-05:00Yes!
And the opposite, the dearth and void, when t...Yes!<br />And the opposite, the dearth and void, when the muse takes a holiday!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-50185369562012096312011-03-09T10:23:13.895-05:002011-03-09T10:23:13.895-05:00the times i have had this feeling...and then i loo...the times i have had this feeling...and then i look at something completely blank and its back again...great os...peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-43455965704534396672011-03-09T05:38:29.760-05:002011-03-09T05:38:29.760-05:00I enjoyed this, and relate on multiple levels. Nic...I enjoyed this, and relate on multiple levels. Nicely stated, great imagery!Lisa Ricard Clarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05048410207952052295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-4570751522481487432011-03-09T05:35:19.987-05:002011-03-09T05:35:19.987-05:00Very deep and yet sweet poemVery deep and yet sweet poembudh.aaahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13277544197089022458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-59638366125014363942011-03-09T05:18:20.065-05:002011-03-09T05:18:20.065-05:00Aaahhh.. been there, Eric!! That elusive little mu...Aaahhh.. been there, Eric!! That elusive little muse... I think you have described her perfectly over here!! But what will we ever do without her (or.. is it "him" for me?!? Umm..whatever)<br /><br />And while we are talking 'muses' here, you might wanna read my previous poem ("placed high").. yea, my muse spoke too! teeheheKavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-22432339853764524222011-03-09T04:14:06.549-05:002011-03-09T04:14:06.549-05:00Nice one Eric, I really enjoyed this piece.
Anita...Nice one Eric, I really enjoyed this piece.<br /><br />Anita. ;)Anita Magdalenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759774477028333590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-82594636317111914472011-03-08T23:58:08.129-05:002011-03-08T23:58:08.129-05:00You expressed it really well Eric!
That's how...You expressed it really well Eric!<br /><br />That's how you always do anyways :)<br /><br />Just the barest trickles escape<br />But it shocks me just the same<br />Better than the electrocution<br />That would be the end of me..<br /><br />Loved it..<br />xoxoxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-37320318524114676612011-03-08T23:06:14.376-05:002011-03-08T23:06:14.376-05:00Ha!....Much better shocked than electrocuted! Mus...Ha!....Much better shocked than electrocuted! Muse fuse...nice.Jerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04874006676004790578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-40863042529924914182011-03-08T22:16:08.815-05:002011-03-08T22:16:08.815-05:00Are there sexual undertones to this? Or is it just...Are there sexual undertones to this? Or is it just me?Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-45789091473997278612011-03-08T21:34:36.265-05:002011-03-08T21:34:36.265-05:00I love the reference of a ball of energy for your ...I love the reference of a ball of energy for your muse. A delightful and uplifting poem. Did you team up with Sender about what topic you were going to write about? Thank you for sharing!Corbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08168756186612658336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-47557052408806036282011-03-08T21:17:36.389-05:002011-03-08T21:17:36.389-05:00Electrical references were awesome. Loved the imag...Electrical references were awesome. Loved the imagery.Heatherhttp://heathergracestewart.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-83254194422469565952011-03-08T20:53:34.150-05:002011-03-08T20:53:34.150-05:00Sometimes what comes out of the ends of my fingers...Sometimes what comes out of the ends of my fingers is truly shocking -- to me most of all. Loved this. Thanks, GayBeachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-26201314647589231872011-03-08T20:46:44.509-05:002011-03-08T20:46:44.509-05:00I'm certainly a better person to be around whe...I'm certainly a better person to be around when I'm writing. So nice when the inspiration flows and frustrating when it stalls.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-74913943785435216412011-03-08T20:15:07.552-05:002011-03-08T20:15:07.552-05:00Love how you use circuits and electricity to expre...Love how you use circuits and electricity to express your muse and that to get something out is better than electruction....nice write...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-81751600686341696612011-03-08T20:02:28.043-05:002011-03-08T20:02:28.043-05:00A light look at a frustrating feeling we've al...A light look at a frustrating feeling we've all experienced. But when the muse comes back, sparks fly :)Diana Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11333180217795290780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-28370569142837127722011-03-08T19:49:12.722-05:002011-03-08T19:49:12.722-05:00Eric, it can happen at times. So, nicely said.
Pa...Eric, it can happen at times. So, nicely said.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-2958457350089856602011-03-08T18:53:31.972-05:002011-03-08T18:53:31.972-05:00Really great way of looking at the creative act of...Really great way of looking at the creative act of writing—fleeting moments through electrical shorts, and not like the ones I wear in the spring. ba dum bum ch. Seriously, I've not heard it put quite this way.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-76368004102511150342011-03-08T17:36:39.791-05:002011-03-08T17:36:39.791-05:00I know that even an electrical muse would do with ...I know that even an electrical muse would do with you, and so well actually!<br />:)Dulcehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08109609856487463466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-52968426060252234002011-03-08T17:33:00.691-05:002011-03-08T17:33:00.691-05:00ooh! I really get this ~ I feel like this. Brillia...ooh! I really get this ~ I feel like this. Brilliant poem : )Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-90729634289312148762011-03-08T17:23:51.075-05:002011-03-08T17:23:51.075-05:00I once knew a man that was in a writing rut. He en...I once knew a man that was in a writing rut. He ended up writing more poems then usual all about his fading muse. :)<br /><br />Great piece. :)Riverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09438967617636244335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-21772819277357266842011-03-08T17:16:54.781-05:002011-03-08T17:16:54.781-05:00this builds so nicely eric - love the surging, glo...this builds so nicely eric - love the surging, glowing, pulsing and expanding - great dynamicsClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com