tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post5331282190609368641..comments2023-11-03T04:59:24.008-04:00Comments on Bubba's Place: AbsenceBubbahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-35925283972901660422011-07-19T23:34:30.098-04:002011-07-19T23:34:30.098-04:00The poem conveys a powerful and emotional jist, gr...The poem conveys a powerful and emotional jist, great write..!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-46906688506805073502011-07-19T19:46:02.904-04:002011-07-19T19:46:02.904-04:00i hope you are feeling better ~
*hugs*i hope you are feeling better ~<br /><br />*hugs*Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-56270477069590318412011-07-18T17:48:42.519-04:002011-07-18T17:48:42.519-04:00I recently lost my father so this poem really reso...I recently lost my father so this poem really resonates with me. Good job.renrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17836973636702788365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-48806657915669320582011-07-18T09:44:51.740-04:002011-07-18T09:44:51.740-04:00The void becomes a presence within itself. When so...The void becomes a presence within itself. When someone so important to us leaves the pain is jarring. This was well written and makes us remember that choices we make so often effects those other than ourselves.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-51141326237256287632011-07-16T16:25:26.460-04:002011-07-16T16:25:26.460-04:00Grief can really catch you hard. For me, poetry h...Grief can really catch you hard. For me, poetry helps...a little.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-33888831077731594942011-07-16T13:47:59.518-04:002011-07-16T13:47:59.518-04:00I could so strongly feel the grief here--I'm s...I could so strongly feel the grief here--I'm so very sorry for your loss and pain. You did a wonderful job of expressing those feelings.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-48039169879467293392011-07-16T12:32:17.436-04:002011-07-16T12:32:17.436-04:00It's been 23 years since my grandmother died.....It's been 23 years since my grandmother died... And it still bloody hurts! *sigh* Thank you for putting words to it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-72165735069984633392011-07-15T20:48:51.328-04:002011-07-15T20:48:51.328-04:00that was interesting and sparked me to write...tha...that was interesting and sparked me to write...thanks<br />ZQAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-15204699491153438542011-07-14T17:10:05.660-04:002011-07-14T17:10:05.660-04:00I don't think we ever really stop missing, I k...I don't think we ever really stop missing, I know I still get choked up sometimes thinking of my grandmother. beautifully written poem, emotionalAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-3245916902004187352011-07-14T15:28:50.657-04:002011-07-14T15:28:50.657-04:00Well written piece about a subject--a pain--that h...Well written piece about a subject--a pain--that has so many answers. For some of us, it does go away in time--a very long time. But we mustn't grieve too long--that's my take anyway.<br />Nice writing about a tough subject!Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/07/14/a-soaking-event-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-15190848510381517922011-07-14T14:01:46.643-04:002011-07-14T14:01:46.643-04:00Heart rending.Heart rending.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-18061818991515780392011-07-14T05:51:56.208-04:002011-07-14T05:51:56.208-04:00Great use of rhetorical question in the third stan...Great use of rhetorical question in the third stanza and the enjambment of 'anymore' in the first.Jack Edwards Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813177533690643652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-32594046172144104682011-07-14T03:20:51.188-04:002011-07-14T03:20:51.188-04:00I hear ya, Eric! I felt this when my granny passed...I hear ya, Eric! I felt this when my granny passed... and it really sucks! <br />Yes, life goes on indeed, and yet.. it's just not the same anymore... <br /><br />My prayers are with all those that have experienced this..Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-39344161231690380372011-07-13T20:40:59.159-04:002011-07-13T20:40:59.159-04:00powerful and perfect expression on loss.
well done...powerful and perfect expression on loss.<br />well done.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing!Jinglehttp://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-87385891095681738352011-07-13T19:21:17.335-04:002011-07-13T19:21:17.335-04:00The complete emotional take over relaxes its teary...The complete emotional take over relaxes its teary grip after time. But moments will happen. Big days or just intense thoughts. Don't fight it. Feel it.Monkey Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741294113777908130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-70017836916582616892011-07-13T18:56:05.380-04:002011-07-13T18:56:05.380-04:00Briam said it best.Briam said it best.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2249823059195376824.post-70760287746877254332011-07-13T17:13:33.726-04:002011-07-13T17:13:33.726-04:00it does last...it may lessen a bit but on big days...it does last...it may lessen a bit but on big days yeah its still there...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com